College life

You may feel that college life is boring. We do not know how to deal with the plenty of spare time. But I think the college life will become wonderful as long as you make it meaningful.

In your spare time, you could play basketball, football and so on. Doing sports is very interesting and good for your health.

In fact, you can do anything which you are interested in.Do not be nervous.We are friends.

Studying in college is a brand new start of our life.You can continue to study hard for the better scords. Libary is a good place for students to study in. If you want to show your talents and skills you can join in all kinds of activities.

In a word,college life is wonderful!

我解釋一下我的意思．

1．tiring是"使人疲勞的". 既然有很多時間，可以休息啊，為什么會疲勞呢？我認為boring（無聊的）比較好．

2．單純說"有很多時間"，不太具體，所以改成"空閑時間"

3．第一段結尾句，蓋的面太大，我把它縮小一些．

4．第三段，說實話，我不太明白你為什么要說"we are friends"，和"nervous"有什么關系．

5.第四段是要講學習嘛，所以添了個studying

6.brand new start是”嶄新的起點”

7．better result是要表達什么

8.show your intelligence是說"展示智商"嗎?我覺得"才藝"比較好

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