高考英語文字書面表達講評教案3

高考英語文字書面表達講評教案 最近你班舉行了一場關于“動物園里籠養動物好不好”的討論。假如你是李華，請你根據下面提供的信息，用英語將討論的結果向某中學生英語報投稿，并陳述你的觀點（至少發揮一條）。注意：字數100左右。 贊成的同學認為 1、有機會親眼目睹野生動物;2、有助于培養對動物和自然的愛;3、能保護動物免于野生環境的危險. 反對的同學認為 1、浪費人力物力;2、破壞生態平衡;3、動物失去自由。 你的觀點 …… Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 一、提煉要點 第一節：很多同學贊成動物園籠養動物。（他們認為這樣）（人們就）有機會親眼目睹野生動物，這有助于培養（人們）對動物和自然的愛；（同時，）（籠養）還能保護動物免于野生環境的危險。 第二節：（相反地）很多也同學不贊成動物園籠養動物。（他們認為）籠養動物浪費人力物力，破壞生態平衡。同時，動物也失去自由。 第三節：在我看來，籠養野生動物是錯誤的，為了保證他們健康成長和生態平衡，應該釋放所有野生動物。 二、靈活表達要點 第一節 1.很多同學贊成動物園籠養動物: ①Many students in our class support the idea that animals can be kept in zoos. ②Many students in our class agree that zoos can keep some wild animals. ③Some of the students in our class think it (is) a good idea to keep animals in zoos. 2.（他們認為這樣就）有機會親眼目睹野生動物： ①They argue that they will have the opportunity to see wild animals if (they are) kept in zoos. ②They think that if animals are kept in zoos, they can go and have a clear look at them. ③They believe that only in this way, can they watch wild animals easily, clearly and safely. 3.這有助于培養（人們）對動物和自然的熱愛。 ①It helps (to) increase people’s love for animals and nature if they see wild animals in zoos. ②Taking a look at wild animals can increase people’s love for animals and nature. ③It is good for people to see animals in zoos, because they can develop a further understanding of animals and nature. 4.（籠養）還能保護動物免于野生環境的危險 ①Wild animals can be protected from dangers in the wild. ②Wild animals can be prevented from being endangered if they are kept in zoos. ③Animals kept in zoos can get away from the dangers in the wild. 第二節 1.很多也同學不贊成動物園籠養動物: ①Other students are against the idea about keeping animals in zoos. ②Other students think it (is) no good keeping animals in zoos. ③The rest of the students have a totally different attitude towards the idea. 2.他們認為:籠養動物浪費人力物力，破壞生態平衡: ①They think (that) it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos and that it will damage the balance of nature. ②They argue (that) keeping animals in zoos is a waste of money and, worse still, will have a negative effect on the balance of nature. ③They believe that it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos, which will also do harm to the balance of nature. 3.同時/另外，動物也失去自由: ①At the same time, animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos. ②Besides, animals will have no freedom when kept in zoos. ③In addition, animals will be deprived of freedom when living in zoos. 第三節 在我看來，籠養野生動物是錯誤的，應該釋放所有野生動物, 以保證生態平衡。 ①In my opinion, it is wrong to keep animals in zoos. All animals should be set free so as to keep the balance of nature. ②Personally speaking, I insist that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos and that animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. ③I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up. I suggest the animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. 三、添加連詞，連段成篇 Dear editor,   I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop people’s love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from dangers in the wild.   However, those who are against the idea think that it’s a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. It’ll also damage the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos.   I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up.   Yours sincerely,    Li Hua

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